Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
thank them for the holiday and the photos
explain why you didn’t write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mike and Lea,
How have you been since we last were in touch? I hope you are still as lovely as you were in the past month.
Firstly I would like to thank you for the fabulous time I had staying at your place during my holiday. That was indeed a memorable time that now is also recorded in printed paper. By the way, thank you so much for sending me the file with the photos, Mike. I have done some portraits and spread them out over my house.
I am really sorry for not writing you before. I hope you understand that I got extremely busy trying to catch up on work since I extended my vacation in almost a week to spend more time celebrating Lea’s birthday.
Before I forget, my birthday is also soon and I would be very glad if you guys could show up for my party. It would be beyond expectations, having the chance to give you as much as you have given me. I promise you will have a nice room with the most desired sight of the History Bridge from your balcony.
Hoping to have a ‘yes’ when you reply.
All the best,
Lais
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eally sorry for not writing you before. I hope you understand that I got extremel...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ge from your balcony. Hoping to have a 'yes' when you reply. All ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, really, so, still, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25615763547 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25598553778 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645320197044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3786789758 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4615384615 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385390428314 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137161938458 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814847590736 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216669583271 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542874573092 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.