You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:
• explain what you like bout the cafeteria
• say what is wrong
• suggest how it could be improved
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my insatisfaction with the current service offered at the college cafeteria.
Particularly, I have daily had lunch at the cafeteria, however over the past few weeks I have noticed a decreasing on the quality of the food while the price of the meal has increased 12%.
Although I recognize its qualities, such as: great range of options on the menu, fair deals for students and also the new stations with gluten free, vegetarian and light food, the conventional stations were still working far from the high level of quality that it used to have.
Finally, I would like to point some items in order to help you with ideas to improve the service again. One of the suggestions is related to offer a weekly deal for regular students who often have lunch at the cafeteria with discount on the purchase of whole meal with a soft drink. Also, new cutlery and chairs may help the kitchen look new and clean.
Once more, thank you for opening the space for students complains and suggestions in your magazine.
Yours sincerely,
Anna Blum.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2018-10-01 | nazirsumra | 78 | view |
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Comments
Dear Sir / Madam,
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to you in response to your letter dated on 1st January 2018 requesting feedback on restaurant service available in our college campus.
I am quite excited to share my honest feedback for the same.
Firstly, We are much satisfied to have this facility available in our campus. The food served is not only hygienic but also cheaper compare to other restaurants located in the town. This is very advantageous for students, especially who are living in hostel. I am using this facility on almost daily basis and find the lunch menu quite attractive and tempting.
Finally, I also want to take this opportunity to provide some suggestions. I have found that there are few options available for health-consious students. I think that students will be grateful if vegetable salads as well as fruit juices are added to the menu.
I am looking forward to share my feedback to canteen management as well as getting published on magazine.
Kind Regards,
Nazir Sumara
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reasing on the quality of the food while the price of the meal has increased 12%....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r from the high level of quality that it used to have. Finally, I would like t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of the suggestions is related to offer a weekly deal for regular students who o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, look, may, so, still, while, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86631016043 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54123813822 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663101604278 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8664335135 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 4.34317383033 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154042928777 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709771015666 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517682426239 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870743737635 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574301494693 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.