Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to you in response to your letter dated 1st January 2018 requesting feedback on restaurant service available on our college campus.
I am quite excited to share my honest feedback for the same.
Firstly, We are much satisfied to have this facility available on our campus. The food served is not only hygienic but also cheaper compare to other restaurants located in the town. This is very advantageous for students, especially who are living in the hostel. I am using this facility on the almost daily basis and find the lunch menu quite attractive and tempting.
Finally, I also want to take this opportunity to provide some suggestions. I have found that there are few options available for health-conscious students. I think that students will be grateful if vegetable salads, as well as fruit juices, are added to the menu.
I am looking forward to sharing my feedback to canteen management as well as getting published in the magazine.
Kind Regards,
Nazir Sumara
- Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree? 78
- You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter:•explain what you like bout the cafeteria•say what is wrong•suggest how it could be improvedBegi 78
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.Write a letter to this friend. In your letter- Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college- Exp 75
- Some people believe that advertisements are useful for viewers, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... fruit juices are added to the menu. I am looking forward to share my feedback...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01796407186 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76884902862 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670658682635 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5945686283 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1818181818 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865227184668 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252219511442 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533399918864 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534747174322 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774354754773 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.