Last month you had an overseas holidays with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holidays photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
1-Thank them for the holidays and the photos
2-explain why you didn't write earlier
3-Invite them to come and stay with you
Hello Jhon and Maria
First of all, I want to thank you for the fantastic holidays we spent together in your hometown last month. Northern Australia is more beautiful than I expected, the landscapes are overwhelming, and the people are very kind. I couldn't wait to go back there again as soon as I could. Once again, thank you for sharing the photos you took. They are so colorful and vivid. Would you mind remembering Johanna to send the pictures she took at their place? We had a great time there with her.
Sorry that I haven't written before. These last couple of weeks have been stressful at work. I had an important presentation with a client, and I was working 24/7 on that project. Luckily, that went well; therefore, I will be in charge of a big account for two years.
Due to my new client, I will have to work even harder, despite that, you should come and visit me. Christmas is getting closer; you know how much I love Christmas. I think you should stay with me. I have plenty of room in the apartment, and we will go sightseeing around the city.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Carlos
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...elming, and the people are very kind. I couldnt wait to go back there again as soon as ...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...at time there with her. Sorry that I havent written before. These last couple of we...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, well, i think, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50731707317 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39633867064 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678048780488 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6709946657 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.3529411765 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0588235294 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326255902846 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867179901758 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821826266161 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130701259147 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996120381921 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.