Letter of Advice - IELTS Writing Task - I, General TestA friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the pro

Dear R,

I read through the letter from you, our working career will have plenty of challenges. I am always here to help you and guide through the difficulties that you face in your career. I completely understood the problem as this would also affect your health. It would be easy if you try to consider these problems as challenges which make the life more interesting.

A couple of years back, I was having a problem with my manager which goes into the extreme level during the appraisal meeting. As I was not given with proper hike and compensation through I was the only person having enough performance for achieving a good percentage of a hike. This pulls me to take some tuff decision to move on my career to the next level since the conversation between us was not to be good. So I decided to move out of the company, then decided to move abroad for further improvement in my career.

At first, I would suggest you have a conversation with your manager discuss it and try to make him understand you are the best person. Provided this would bring down the gap between you and your manager if this gets into positive continue to stay there else I will make some arrangments in my company to pull you inside here.

It's been so long since we last ever meet each other during our college days but I'll never forget those funny moments during our last days in university education. Let's have a plan for this vacation to meet up with each other to have some wonderful time.

Get back to me as soon as possible.

Best Wishes,
Kokulakrishnan.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ficulties that you face in your career. I completely understood the problem as th...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... each other during our college days but Ill never forget those funny moments during...
^^^
Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... our last days in university education. Lets have a plan for this vacation to meet u...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 937.175257732 137% => OK
No of words: 281.0 206.0 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55871886121 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51113451103 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5102615155 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203468228165 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731455280113 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707626952472 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104525260481 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1036206596 0.0580467560999 179% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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