Letter of request:
You are traveling and need someone to do you a favor while you are gone. Write a letter asking a neighbor or friend for help. In your letter, include:
-Where you are going
-What the favor is
-Why you need this friend to help
Dear Mike,
How is it going on? I hope everything is fine at these uncertain times. Do you remember I’ve told you that I would like to attend my sister’s wedding in Moscow? She and her husband planned to get married in the summer but suddenly have changed their plans. So they decided to register their relationship on Saturday next week. That’s why I’m planning to take five days off in order to attend this celebration and explore Moscow city.
I’ve already notified my boss that I will be off from Monday till Friday next week, but in fact I cannot leave if you don’t help me. The matter is I can’t leave my dog Bonny alone at home for such a long period of time. Could you please be so kind and take care of it while I’m out? It will be a great help for me as a dog shelter is closed for renovation. I will leave dog food and all the instructions if something unexpected happens. In fact, Bonny is trained and won’t be a pain in your ass for sure.)))
Anyway, don’t hesitate to call me anytime.
Take care and stay safe,
Maria
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2021-06-16 | Mariamirabella | 73 | view |
| 2018-10-13 | drtruong92 | 83 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...dog Bonny alone at home for such a long period of time. Could you please be so kind and take c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, if, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36040609137 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29690804003 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659898477157 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5392676136 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3571428571 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163456678578 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475396835697 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628462534981 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638124392548 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638649700472 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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