A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures.
Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
• Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
• Explain why would they be of interest to the students
• Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
Dear Mr.
My name is John Paul and I am studying Art and Culture Program in the college. I am writing this letter to express my desire to deliver a speech on the coming international culture day. I would like to elaborate about culture of my country, for which I would request you to guide me if arrangements would be required.
I am interested in talking about culture and tradition of my country as I consider that it would be the most appropriate topic to represent my culture and values on that day. It will be an honor for me to highlight how peaceful my country is and how much rich culture does it has.
Although it might be a controversial topic of talk for many people, I feel that in order to remove the alleged stain of terrorism from the face of my country, it will be the most suitable topic to be elaborated to the students. As many of them are not aware about the real situation, it would trigger their interest to know how peaceful my country and people are.
If you allow me, I will arrange everything like multimedia where I could display some images and play a video which I have made particularly for the event. I would be happier to organize if any other thing would be needed for the speech. It would be so kind of you if you could permit to fulfill my responsibility as a patriotic citizen.
I look forward to having your response in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
John Paul.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. My name is John Paul and I am studying A...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...if arrangements would be required. I am interested in talking about culture ...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
...ry is and how much rich culture does it has. Although it might be a controvers...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...ry is and how much rich culture does it has. Although it might be a controvers...
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Line 15, column 286, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fulfilling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: fulfilling
...d be so kind of you if you could permit to fulfill my responsibility as a patriotic citize...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i feel, kind of, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48846153846 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62679637041 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1866817531 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149608718709 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634075878887 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354986263692 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883563513537 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120199592719 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.