Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skills. What are the causes? Suggest possible solutions.
Nowadays employers do not demand academic excellence only, but they hire candidates with better personal skills such as communication skill, capacity to work within team and solution finding. However, competitive atmosphere in educational institutions as well as non serious attitude of young professional are two major indicators of lack of the skills. Fortunately these shortcomings can be controlled collectively.
How do businesses run in a country? After finances, staff is another major source to run a business successfully, but if employees of a business are not adequately equipped with skillful traits then how anyone can do the business. Educational institutions do not pay attention on developing such skills which <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">a business market</span> requires. Instead, they are entirely focused in making their students to get higher grades by introducing them to a competitive atmosphere. Universities do not prepare their students for practicality of a business market which needs techniques, such as pressure handling, effective communication, better coöperation with team workers and solution finding.
Young professionals besides personal skills also lack lateral thinking. Generally their hardcore goal is to grab an opportunity; however they do not have seriousness about their career. They usually do not have long-term goals but only short terms. In America research was conducted on finding reasons to inadequate corporate skills , and it was found that young generation is not goal oriented and it more or less favors having a life free from logics and thoughts.
It is suggested that if families and educational institutions both prefer inculcating interpersonal skills among children and students, they, consequently, suit to businesses better than those having excellent academic grades. To train young graduates as per demand of business market, universities should begin communication classes along academic classes.
To conclude, while students during their tertiary education pay close attention to get degrees with distinctions, they must get awareness about augmenting their interactive skills, so that they might not face lash out by their future employer who always wish better communicator and solution finder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oyer who always wish better communicator and solution finder.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, so, then, well, while, such as, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89457831325 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31492359613 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629518072289 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1330868757 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.466666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190253228446 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605239001473 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322152231609 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992818434982 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221122661111 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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