Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends, others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and love. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The exchange of gifts on special occasions is the centuries-old norm, and it is believed by some people that this is a vital way to convey your affection with others. However, others think that this is not the only proved method to show someone your love; there are several other ideas which can be effective to express your sentiments. I believe that the exchange of gifts is, undoubtedly, a traditional way to pour love but limited as well.
People always make efforts to develop strong bonding with their family members and friends and to accomplish this; they usually take the support of expensive and attractive presents. Even they spend money and time on choosing gifts because they want to amplify their affection with family and friends through valuable presents. Also, when people cannot express their emotions in words, then they consider that gifts can do this. This way gift receiver not only appreciates the gift but also starts believing that he is important to them. Although sometimes a wrong choice can do the opposite, buying gifts wisely is also equally important.
On the other hand, some people believe that offering support to your relatives and friends at the time of need is a louder way to showcase your care for them because it is a famous phrase " a friend in need is a friend indeed." Furthermore, pure and genuine moral support cannot be substituted with gifts like a pair of shoes or mobile phones. For the people who value emotions and feelings, monetary gains in the form of gifts are less or not important to them.
I value moral, emotional and physical assistance more than things as gifts. Indeed, gifts are one of the oldest forms of transforming your inner thoughts to someone; however, it is also a narrow way to do so. When my mother could not give me a present on my last birthday, I did not start thinking that she does not love me anymore. Since I have seen her doing efforts for my betterment on several occasions, therefore, I was aware of her affection for me. Her feelings are not dependent on any gift.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74651810585 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52496784852 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545961002786 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6124906278 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193082278205 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599995812332 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048742582456 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116270584289 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047141873762 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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