International travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are openning their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
The tourism industry is flourishing because of economical travel packages available worldwide. Although this growing trend sometimes misuses natural resources, there are several benefits of it, such as revenue generation and promotion of culture. I believe that these benefits are far more significant than limited drawbacks.
Tourism activities produce a lot of revenue. Due to tourists, three businesses boost incredibly: Hotel industry, food industry and transportation services. When tourists visit other countries, they must avail services of these industries during their stay. It does not only generate income to governments and the business owners but also provides employment opportunities to the local people. Many countries, for instance Thailand, Maldives, Singpore, have strong economy and low unemployment rate on the basis of tourism, so it has a huge monetary benefit both for masses and governments. In addition, tourism helps in promoting culture of a country or place. Many tourists make documentaries about characteristics of food, buildings, climate and lifestyle of tourist places which they visit, and these documentaries are seen by many people around the globe when the tourists upload them on Youtube channels. Therefore, it enhances culture of a place and brings popularity to it.
As far as disadvantages are concerned, if countries do not have efficient management and administration, tourism will destroy natural resources of forests, rivers and valleys. When a large number of tourists visits a tourist attraction often, they deteriorate natural resources by overusing them. Muree, for instance, is a popular hill station in my country, and increasing human activities have almost destroyed its natural habitats of wild animals. Pollution besides destruction of natural habitats is another potential threat to the beauty of tourist places as visitors litter everywhere.
In my opinion, however, an effective administration can preserve natural resources and habitats since there are manageable issues. The fact of significant benefits of tourism, like income, employment and business development is hard to ignore, therefore, I believe its advantages far more than its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...es of forests, rivers and valleys. When a large number of tourists visits a tourist attraction of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82874617737 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11397584615 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645259938838 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8653150665 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.117647059 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122210055036 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378628324952 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372341938883 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684737531964 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161043997242 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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