The local government is planning to change the bus timetable.You are not happy about the proposed changes.Write a letter to the newspaper.In the letter describe the changes explain how they will affect you say how you would improve the service.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a citizen living in London and on Noufle Luchato Street.I am writing a letter of complaint about the government's decision on when to take the buses. I will briefly outline the details of this letter below.A few days ago, the government decided to change the timing of buses. As the bus arrives at the station is increased, the number of buses to the airport is reduced.
I work at London International Airport and have a flexible working hours. At times I can't get a taxi and have to get to work by bus.With this situation I can no longer use the bus and have to pay a lot for the taxi and when there is no taxi I can not get to work.I have been in the airport for a few months and will lose my job.
I am writing suggestions for you and I hope these suggestions can be followed.The government can either reduce taxi fares or take taxis at all hours of the day. This is a busy and popular route for people.
I urge you to read my letter and print it in your newspaper because in this letter I have addressed the problem of many people and I hope you support it as well.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours faithfully,
Daniali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... in London and on Noufle Luchato Street.I am writing a letter of complaint about ...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nts decision on when to take the buses. I will briefly outline the details of thi...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...utline the details of this letter below.A few days ago, the government decided to...
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Line 7, column 68, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
...nal Airport and have a flexible working hours. At times I cant get a taxi and have to...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ve a flexible working hours. At times I cant get a taxi and have to get to work by b...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...t a taxi and have to get to work by bus.With this situation I can no longer use the ...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... there is no taxi I can not get to work.I have been in the airport for a few mont...
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Line 11, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... hope these suggestions can be followed.The government can either reduce taxi fares...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33771929825 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43107511046 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521929824561 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3105133844 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.888888889 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159685516408 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664620969912 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598942565596 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101457408881 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590740308709 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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