In many countries imprisonment is said to be the most common solution to crimes but I agree that education will be a more effective solution.
Imprisonment helps put culprits behind bars and remove them from the society hence making it safe for the citizens. On the other hand I agree with the fact that education plays a better role by educating individuals and make them not commit a crime in the first place. The human mind is a vacuum and eager to learn new things. Educating the citizens with the right information will not only solve issues of crime but make our world a better place.
I believe that sending people to prison will not really impact the right results needed so I’d suggest that other countries should adopt the solution of education which will drastically reduce crime and also build a nation where the future generations will thrive and exist in a crime free world
This is the extent to which I agree.
Yours faithfully
Adam Grant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
In many countries imprisonment is said to be the most com...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...e for the citizens. On the other hand I agree with the fact that education plays a better role by educat...
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Line 6, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l thrive and exist in a crime free world This is the extent to which I agree. ...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to which I agree. Yours faithfully Adam Grant
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Line 12, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ree. Yours faithfully Adam Grant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, really, so, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85119047619 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41398954462 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.8441448258 44.8134815571 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 4.34317383033 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378139054497 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149459821842 0.0766984524023 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183344858742 0.0603063233224 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238156015819 0.12726935374 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19455761682 0.0580467560999 335% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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