the map below shows the development of village of rymouth between 1995 and present .summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The map depicts the progress of rymouth village between 1995 and present.
It can be vividly seen that in 1995, there was a sea area in the south part and fishing port in the middle of the sea. In the corner side of the sea there was a cafe. Fish market was in the corner of the sea side. In the west side some shops were available. Houses were established in both side of the main road. In the east side of the main road most of the area were covered with farmland in the north and Forest Park .Hotel also situated in the downside corner of the road.
Turning to rest of description, in the present village, the farmland area is convert with playground for golf and tennis. A car park also establish near the hotel. On the west side of the road housing area is increasing one new road along with houses is built in the west side. The shops is convert with restourent. There is no fishing port in the sea and fish market turned into apartments.
- Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. why do you think it happens. what are the advantage and disadvantages of such a choice. Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. why do you think it hap 48
- some people think that paying taxes is enough to use society others argue that being a citizen involved more responsibilities discuss what is your opinion 68
- some people say that subject like art, drama, add creative writing are more beneficial to children and therefore thay need more of these subject to be included in the timetable. do you agree or disagree. 56
- some people believe that Olympics games do not have a role in the 21st century. do you u agree or disagree with the statement. 61
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children s charity located in the USA spend and recieved in on year 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of the area were covered with farmland in the north and Forest Park .Hotel also...
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Suggestion: .
...h farmland in the north and Forest Park .Hotel also situated in the downside corn...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hotel
...farmland in the north and Forest Park .Hotel also situated in the downside corner of...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...es is built in the west side. The shops is convert with restourent. There is no fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29444444444 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15603517001 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 127.690721649 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.622605031667 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7268451078 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4166666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0769984765575 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394351586398 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914443737103 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128435106995 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148342533862 0.0580467560999 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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