Nowadays, its noticed that hopefulness of human liveliness increasing by use of healing auotomation. use of advancement in treating mankind has expanded since few years. however ,it has both school of thought. I am force to admit that it playing tremendous role in serving and raising human's long than their original fact.
To be starts with, in favour of development in field of I.T ,man discover the treatment of hazardious disease like HIV.as it noticed that huge of lives gone due to cancer ,but it lookup that treatment for this illness is cured.advanced technology raised its departnments in operation of laser by no cut and no pain. in addition using technology in the medical feed promising individual to save theier loved one's .by help botics the disable can walk, either we can understand the language of other culture by use of mechanics.it can be ultimately accounted for that telecommunication consuming their best roles in medicinal.
on other hand, there is some flaws as well taking advantage of preventive measures , as by this we can know all the patient condition and how long effective will survive that's another dilemma .sometimes due to out of order of machinery gives us wrong results .
to recapitulating, I may lead to a summarized opine that applied sciences serving humans so well and its advantages outweigh the flaws of mechanics.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Use
...creasing by use of healing auotomation. use of advancement in treating mankind has ...
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Suggestion: However
...g mankind has expanded since few years. however ,it has both school of thought. I am fo...
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Suggestion: ,
...nd has expanded since few years. however ,it has both school of thought. I am forc...
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... in favour of development in field of I.T ,man discover the treatment of hazardio...
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Suggestion: ,
...in favour of development in field of I.T ,man discover the treatment of hazardious...
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...ed that huge of lives gone due to cancer ,but it lookup that treatment for this il...
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...eration of laser by no cut and no pain. in addition using technology in the medica...
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Suggestion: addition,
...tion of laser by no cut and no pain. in addition using technology in the medical feed pr...
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Suggestion: .
...ing individual to save theier loved ones .by help botics the disable can walk, eit...
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... save theier loved ones .by help botics the disable can walk, either we can understand the ...
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Suggestion: On
...nsuming their best roles in medicinal. on other hand, there is some flaws as well...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are some flaws'?
Suggestion: there are some flaws
...est roles in medicinal. on other hand, there is some flaws as well taking advantage of preventive ...
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Suggestion: ,
... taking advantage of preventive measures , as by this we can know all the patient ...
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Suggestion: that's
...ion and how long effective will survive thats another dilemma .sometimes due to out o...
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Suggestion: .
...ctive will survive thats another dilemma .sometimes due to out of order of machine...
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Suggestion: .
...rder of machinery gives us wrong results . to recapitulating, I may lead to a sum...
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Suggestion: To
... of machinery gives us wrong results . to recapitulating, I may lead to a summari...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, may, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08482142857 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9918736362 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.586472671 44.8134815571 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.375 76.5299724578 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0572843624453 0.216113520407 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.023471086222 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0193298810645 0.0603063233224 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0316515158289 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018624143631 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 8.37731958763 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 70.7449484536 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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