Dear Mrs. Jinny,
I, Diya, your next-door neighbor writing this letter to draw your attention that you have carried our main dust bin to your garden a couple of days ago when you were shifted here.
As you are new to this society, I’d be glad to inform you that our local municipal corporation does provide brand new dustpans to the people who arrive. To fetch this you have to meet the local councilor, provide them your house address along with one proof of staying, either a current bill or a gas bill so that they can supply the goods at the earliest.
I’d be delighted to receive our dustbin by tomorrow as we are facing issues to throw the trash. I cannot, however, live without a bin. So, I expect to receive the bin on receipt of this letter, if not I am forced to file a case against you in the council as you are not returning the dustbin, who may further ask you to pay the fine for troubling us.
I look forward to receiving a prompt response.
Warm regards,
Diya Rachael
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44324324324 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23463669726 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664864864865 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7274440308 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206696358012 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643929941264 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672065540369 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109186911188 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756132612781 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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