A new neighbour has moved in next door and has taken your main rubbish bin.
Write a letter to your new neighbour requesting that they return the item. In the letter:
– Explain that new bins must be sourced from the local council
– Request that the person returns your bin immediately
– Inform the person of what further actions you will take should they not return your bin
Dear Mrs. Braganza,
I am writing this letter to express my disapproval over the main rubbish bin that was standing in front of my street.
As you are new to this neighborhood, I assume that you are not aware about the functioning of the rubbish bins. New rubbish bins are sourced from the local council upon request and every house is to have a separate rubbish bin of their own. You can write or personally visit the local council to request for a new bin.
It seems that unknowingly you have taken my bin for your use. I request that you return the bin back to us immediately as I have been finding it extremely difficult to clear out my wastes. The garbage truck will only clear out the rubbish from the main bins and we being a family of 6, waste piles up in no time.
I expect that the bin be returned on receipt of this letter, if not then I will have to file a case against you with the building Society Manager, who may ask you to pay a fine for the trouble caused.. To avoid this consequence, please do as requested.
I will be waiting for my bin to be returned as soon as possible.
Kind regards,
Malita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... request that you return the bin back to us immediately as I have been finding it...
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Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...you to pay a fine for the trouble caused.. To avoid this consequence, please do as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33802816901 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38826434131 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568075117371 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3065217943 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329903548536 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116869134226 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100959611815 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17192373725 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968611070164 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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