An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at theairport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.Write to your friend. In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alte

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An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the
airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.
Write to your friend. In your letter
 Explain the situation
 Offer to make alternate arrangements

Dear John,
I hope you are well and I'm eagerly interested in visiting you after so many years.

Unfortunately, on 27th of June, exactly at your arrival date and time, I have to attend a meeting at the office. My company is going to sign a contract with a British partner in London and I was part of the team who negotiate terms and conditions in the past, consequently I have to take part in the meeting and I cannot miss it.

I suggest you taking a taxi and go straight to my apartment. I will get the keys to my neighbor, just turn to number 10 and ask for Suzanne, she knows you and will give you the keys. I will see you in the evening around 10, until then you can take a hot shower and take a nap.

I hope you have a nice journey and waiting to see you.

Best wishes,
Rahi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope you are well and Im eagerly inter...
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Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear John, I hope you are well and Im eagerly interested in visiting you afte...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e knows you and will give you the keys. I will see you in the evening around 10, ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...an take a hot shower and take a nap. I hope you have a nice journey and waitin...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 640.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10256410256 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31462633465 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2662589199 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185333174407 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768125651855 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510397474428 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106323076996 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00666067298663 0.0580467560999 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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