An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the
airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.
Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain the situation
Offer to make alternate arrangements
Dear Amanda,
how are you doing and how is the family?Thank you for having me over for Christmas last year. I must say, the vacation was the best I have been in recent times. The best part for me was our visit to the Whispering palms, the swimming pool and the zoo. It brightens my day every time I look through the pictures.
I am glad when I received your letter about your proposed visit to Nigeria next month. It is refreshing knowing you have finally accepted to come down for Easter celebration. This would avail us the opportunity of visiting different monumental places in my country such as The Bar Beach, Eyo Museum, Obudu Cattle Ranch and so on.
Unfortunately, my organization departmental retreat would be holding on the same date of your arrival, and attendance was made compulsory for all staf.
As you can see, I would be unable to pick you up at the airport due to this work related restraint. However, my husband would be coming to receive you at the airport as soon as your plane touch down.
I hope you do understand, looking forward to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Amailia Johnson.
- you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.write a letter to the restaurant manager. in your lettergive details of your visit to the restaurantexplain the reason for 73
- Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe that other family members can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.Is this a positive or a negative development? 67
- You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letterSay where / when you went on holidayExplain why you are not satisfied with your holidayTell them what you would like them to do 81
- YOU ORDERED A NEW CHEQUE BOOK FROM YOUR BANK TWO WEEKS AGO BUT YOU HAVE RECEIVED NOTHING.WRITE A LETTER TO THE MANAGER COMPLAINING ABOUT THE BAD SERVICE.- SAY WHEN AND HOW YOU ORDERED IT.- ASK HOW MUCH LONGER YOU WILL HAVE TO WAIT AND ASK THE MANAGER WHAT 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amanda, how are you doing and how is the family?...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thank
...how are you doing and how is the family?Thank you for having me over for Christmas la...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... This would avail us the opportunity of visiting different monumental places in ...
^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dance was made compulsory for all staf. As you can see, I would be unable to pic...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rport as soon as your plane touch down. I hope you do understand, looking forwar...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 43, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...hope you do understand, looking forward to see you soon. Best Regards, Amailia...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to see you soon. Best Regards, Amailia Johnson.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68181818182 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60455774535 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4161622239 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232968257122 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804371993694 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742030995589 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128824135502 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642173742596 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.