Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you in sheer good health. After mulling over on your business proposal for a significant amount of time, I decided to revert you regarding it. As, you told me that you are planning to establish a Multi-speciality Hospital in Noida of hundred beds which will be embellished with all modern facilities such as C.T and M.R.I machines and that you want to make me a partner in this project.
Firstly, I firmly believe, it is an excellent notion for the upliftment of your career however, considering all the facts, I concluded that it will not be appropriate for me because unlike you, I do not have immense funds to contribute equally in this project. In addition, I have no business sense in fact, no one in my entire family has been into this occupation. Most of my family members are either Engineers or Doctors just like me and to be a successful businessman, it is mandatory to have sufficient knowledge and experience.
Though, it is not only a tempting offer but indeed a dream of every Doctor to own a Hospital nonetheless, I have to state woefully that I do not find myself suitable for this responsibility. Although, you have huge expectations from me but I am certain that you will try to comprehend my difficulty. I hope, my decision will have no adverse effect on our robust friendship.
I express deepest apology for this matter.
All the best,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: T
...ed with all modern facilities such as C.T and M.R.I machines and that you want to...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...l modern facilities such as C.T and M.R.I machines and that you want to make me a...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'machine'
Suggestion: machine
...modern facilities such as C.T and M.R.I machines and that you want to make me a partner ...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to make me a partner in this project. Firstly, I firmly believe, it is an exce...
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Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'express the deepest'.
Suggestion: express the deepest
... effect on our robust friendship. I express deepest apology for this matter. All the bes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73279352227 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91071437819 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8976039213 44.8134815571 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.272727273 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232548549618 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818190815763 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514501756146 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133669874478 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577345368671 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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