Dear Sam,
It was a very pleasant surprise to hear from you after such a long time. I am quite excited to know that I've an entrepreneur in my closest circle, and I must thank you for inviting me to be a partner in your start-up.
First of all, I am highly intrigued with your concept for DevOps, which is certainly the future of the Information technology. Currently, even in my company, we always have issues with configuration, and we squander most of our efforts in setting up the project. But with your proposed business solution, I believe most companies do not need to worry about this anymore.
Being such a wonderful business idea, it's so nice of you to consider me to share hands with your business, and I am really sorry to turn down your offer. As you already know that I was planning to get settled in Canada and fortunately, I got my application for permanent residence confirmed a week back. So, I'll be migrating to Canada by the end of this month to pursue my dream and this made to reject your offer.
Once again, I am really sorry for letting you down, but I strongly believe that our friendship will remain undisturbed forever.
Hoping to see you soon.
Yours truly,
John Jacob
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...nt residence confirmed a week back. So, Ill be migrating to Canada by the end of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60368663594 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6135005291 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9304484102 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8181818182 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278038044477 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108746436971 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069420897755 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133313345067 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643093740607 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.