One of your penfriends is going to emigrate to Australia in a few months. They want to improve their English before they leave and have asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your penfriend and give them advice on how to improve their speaking , listening and vocabulary.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear…,
Dear John,
I'm really excited to hear you are moving to Australia. How has preparations been? In your letter, you asked me for some advice on how to enhance your English Language skills and here are a few points to consider.
Speaking is your most valuable asset in an English-Speaking country. The sole language of communication in Australia is English and therefore, it will be important that you raise your standard of spoken English. To do this, I'd suggest you practice everyday. Try talking to everyone in English Language. Also, you should look for native speakers nearby and communicate with them. You may also consider enrolling in a language school.
For your listening skills, I will advise you tune to the BBC radio and television programs. I think you should make it a point of duty to listen to their 9:00 PM news everyday and checkout some other programs they have that may be helpful. In addition, you should also look for other channels on the television and radio that have nice English Language programs.
Another aspect of your language skills that you should consider working on, is you vocabulary. It's important that you show you have a wide range of vocabulary at workplace. It will also help you to understand the people you will come in contact with very well. To advance you vocabulary, I will suggest you use a number of sites. Visit the British Council website. They have some nice materials and tutorials on vocabulary. You will also see links to other resources on vocabulary and they are quite valuable.
John, I have to do some other stuff. If you need anything, just drop me some lines.
All the best,
Alfred.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... do this, I'd suggest you practice everyday. Try talking to everyone in English Lan...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...of duty to listen to their 9:00 PM news everyday and checkout some other programs they h...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'i think', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206060606061 0.220444632235 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.154545454545 0.167888034529 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0787878787879 0.0606518309736 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0454545454545 0.0506257000042 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.127272727273 0.118615021944 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0878787878788 0.107062808482 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0151515151515 0.041066498444 37% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.63320961912 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0393939393939 0.0385302599488 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0606060606061 0.0714148451538 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0363636363636 0.0191574576366 190% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00606060606061 0.00930345855455 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1672.0 1141.60824742 146% => OK
No of words: 284.0 206.134020619 138% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88732394366 5.53046319177 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.78085437643 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334507042254 0.284621296913 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260563380282 0.211203875043 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193661971831 0.133321485273 145% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112676056338 0.0843313296314 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63320961912 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.622163163488 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.9162384717 62.8969750728 87% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 12.9587628866 170% => OK
Sentence length: 12.9090909091 16.4300151701 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3457538334 44.7399317507 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 90.9928171075 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9090909091 16.4300151701 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.613754768223 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 38.9654289373 37.5504026743 104% => OK
Elegance: 0.944444444444 1.13073093955 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347404521651 0.331212695627 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102044638126 0.0927372745006 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0845891498375 0.0736520305886 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503291618317 0.579516596996 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165471360651 0.180689518051 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121537719804 0.122183219658 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980910041036 0.0765303033291 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307886924516 0.211926503985 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0838765589135 0.0737400523855 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24123972459 0.203819188451 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112137850747 0.067151250289 167% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.45360824742 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.0206185567 249% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 4.73195876289 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.56701030928 234% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 8.32989690722 180% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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