ou and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there.
Write a letter to a property agent. in your letter
- Introduce yourself and your family
- Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
- Give your preference for the location of the accommodation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My family and I are moving to your city and we would need rented accommodation and we would need your assistance to find perfect accommodation for us.
As an introduction, I am a chartered accountant (CA) by profession and I was working in India and now I am moving to London for my new role. I have with me my beautiful wife, who is also a chartered accountant (CA) and one son aged 8. My son is on class 3, he enjoy playing with other kids.
We would need 2 story building near the main city of London where my office is situated. Building should have 3 bedrooms, 2 washrooms and open trace for all the rooms. One important thing, we do not want to share our building, it should be independent. Furthermore, it would be great if you can find building with the garden and some open area for parking.
Considering we have son who goes to school, we prepare area nearby the good school. We would prefer area nearby our office location and are with cooperative neighbourhood. Further, consideration must be given to my son who want to play in park and open area.
Hope above information help you finding the accommodation suitable for us. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincere thanks
Binod Khatri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ommodation for us. As an introduction, I am a chartered accountant CA by profes...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...ne son aged 8. My son is on class 3, he enjoy playing with other kids. We would ...
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Line 17, column 33, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to find' or 'find'.
Suggestion: to find; find
...a. Hope above information help you finding the accommodation suitable for us. Look...
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Line 21, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Sincere thanks Binod Khatri
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65158371041 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77449740217 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597285067873 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1300789777 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4285714286 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165984690613 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057600582855 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886532180854 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124287811605 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122160065879 0.0580467560999 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.