ou have recently employed a plumber to do a job at a place you were renovating; however, something went wrong with the work and it created a problem for your project. Write a letter to the plumber and say:
• What the problem is
• How it can be fixed?
• Suggest how to approach the job in future.
Dear Mr. Singh,
I am writing this letter to complain about the plumbing work, which you have finished in the last month for my house. Just to remind you that you were hired to install pipes in all the washrooms of my house, and everything went really well. I did not have any complain from your work until yesterday.
Let me explain you what exactly happened. Since yesterday there has been water leakage from two of the pipes you installed. Although i tried to fix it using some tools and techniques, all efforts went in vein, and now my house is flooding. As far as i understood, the connection of these particular pipes are loose, so it could not take the load of water flow, hence started throwing it out. I think if you bring your tools and re-install these pipes with proper pressure, the water leakage will stop.
It will be great if you can visit tomorrow morning to fix the issue, and for future, i would recommend you to do an final inspection after you finish the job to check if everything is function well.
Do let me know in-case of any delay\concern to solve this issue.
Yours sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t me explain you what exactly happened. Since yesterday there has been water leakage ...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wo of the pipes you installed. Although i tried to fix it using some tools and te...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: IN_VEIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in vain' (=unsuccessfully)?
Suggestion: in vain
... tools and techniques, all efforts went in vein, and now my house is flooding. As far a...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and now my house is flooding. As far as i understood, the connection of these par...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rning to fix the issue, and for future, i would recommend you to do an final insp...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...for future, i would recommend you to do an final inspection after you finish the j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, well, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58706467662 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4002899918 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.7468193035 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181847156623 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658241154123 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409217866608 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100844622793 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055185837153 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.