ou have a spare room in your apartment, you would like to rent out to a college student. Write a letter to student accommodation officer of local college.
In your letter, you should tell:
where it is
explain about the room
to which type of student you would like to give.
Dear Headteacher,
I am Yasmin kaur. I am neighbour living in your vicinity.The motive of my writing is in regards to a vacant space available in my apartment sapphire in room no. B3 . Let me elaborate in details.
Initially,I was living with my co-worker due to some reason she moved and now her portion of living
is available for a new tenant. My apartment is cozy and tidy. Perhaps it has space for keeping few things if tenant wish to put. Secondly, it has an individual study desk included with a chair and a lamp . Also , I have my extra old computer on study table too. Furthermore, bed mattress are in fine condition. But, there is no private bathroom. As well as the student has to share kitchen and living area.Thirdly, there is no restrictions on ate night watching t.v, high music as well as meals. As I am also
fun loving person.
Lastly, the rent of room is slightly higher as the place is near to the university campus and supermarkets so it's saves time of the student. The monthly payment is 1000 dollar and no negotiations.
At the end of the day, I prefer the female tenant who can share with me.Needless to say, I have no discrimination with any caste or religion whosoever she will be I will try my best to accompany with her.
I look forward to a reply from your with list of tenants.
Yours sincerely,
Yasmin kaur.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
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...ching t.v, high music as well as meals. As I am also fun loving person. Lastly,...
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...he student. The monthly payment is 1000 dollar and no negotiations. At the end of the...
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...the female tenant who can share with me.Needless to say, I have no discrimination with a...
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... with list of tenants. Yours sincerely, Yasmin kaur.
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...t of tenants. Yours sincerely, Yasmin kaur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52459016393 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74908027249 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1639030634 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9411764706 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3529411765 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.078041812855 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211708131033 0.0766984524023 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317467538929 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0388989965897 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277968780769 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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