our neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear mr and mrs Brown,
I hope your are kepping well. I am writing this letter in response to your complain that you sent me yesterday about the noise from my house.When I recevied your letter, I felt very embarrassed to know that we became the reason of your discomfort and your family.
As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my bathroom which is on the first floor.
I have recently noticed a leak in my sitting room ceiling. The plumber has checked and found out that the bathroom pipe was broken and needed to be fixed urgently to avoid the subsequent damage to the ceiling.Hence, the sounds coming from my house. The repairs were estimated to take at most three days but unfortunately, it is lingering longer than expected.
I am regretful for that. Please accept my sincere apology for the inconvenience cause to you and humbly ask for your forgiveness.
The plumber has been adviced to work only in the mornings between the hours of 8 am - 12 pm when you will be at the office.
I am deeply sorry for all the bother caused.
Yours sincerely,
Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
...yesterday about the noise from my house.When I recevied your letter, I felt very emb...
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Line 15, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...id the subsequent damage to the ceiling.Hence, the sounds coming from my house. The r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77720207254 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59447896032 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668393782383 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4743391894 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329605618275 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105862105074 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989609836786 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113044088993 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120615629842 0.0580467560999 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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