Parents of your close friend are coming to your area for a visit. He/she asked you to suggest some places for older people to visit. Write a letter to your friend and include the following.
- Suggest some places his/her parents could visit.
- Recommend a place for them to stay.
- Give some other ideas for their visit.
Dear Jony,
Hello, I am fine here and hope you are in the radiant of your health and high spirits. What a pleasant surprise, to see your wonderful letter yesterday. I am pleased to guide you about your parents visit to India and help them during their visit.
During their 15 days stay I would suggest main 2 cities to plan in their travel plans. Firstly, they should visit to Golden Temple of Amritsar the world famous religious place for Sikh community. They will enjoy visiting this place and can also go to see the Wagaha Border, the main site on India and Pakistan border to enjoy parade. Second main city to visit is Agra, one of the seven wonders of the world is situated in the middle of Agra.
They can stay at my residence if they are comfortable. If they want to stay in hotel there are many good 3-5 hotels out if which THE SUN RESIDENCY is the Best in Amritsar and THE PALMS in Agra.
They can do see seeing and shopping at multiple locations. They can enjoy local food and take a feel of local culture during their stay. For any further inquiry regarding their visit and if you want me to arrange or book some local transport facility and hotels for stay please feel free to confirm me as soon as possible. Pay me regards to your parents and love to children.
Yours Sincerely,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 121, Rule ID: IF_WHICH[1]
Message: 'which' should not follow 'if'. Choose either one. Or did you forget a comma?
Suggestion: which; if; if, which
...otel there are many good 3-5 hotels out if which THE SUN RESIDENCY is the Best in Amrits...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47302904564 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14791920917 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580912863071 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7566821866 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228604965226 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813113988516 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070328799401 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127815422949 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866743129846 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.