as part of your study you have worked for a short period of time in a company.
write a letter to the manager of this company. In your letter:
1. Thank he/she for the opportunity.
2. Explain how the experience gained there has helped you
3. Share your plan for the future
Dear Mr. Tom!
I am Richard Vo who practiced for last 3 months in your company. I am writing to show my appreciation for everything you did for my during the time i worked in you organization.
I began my internship program in April 20 and finished the course on July 20. Although only 3 months, however i learnt so much from you and your company. You instructed me a lot of necessary skills to become a professional legal officer, such as, the management time, negotiation skill, team-working. Specially, the legal problem-solving ability is one of the most important because i can solve the real problems that help me get more confidence in my future job. Moreover, I always remember your words when i worked in your legal department, is that always generate your dream come true, do not let it only dream. That is why, i intend to find a scholarship and study Master’s course of law in Canada, after that, i will join the practiced test to become a lawyer. I hope we can become a good colleague in the future.
Once again, I am very thankful for your training and help which assist me to get mature in my career.
Yours sincerely,
Richard Vo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...erything you did for my during the time i worked in you organization. I began my...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the time i worked in you organization. I began my internship program in April 20...
^
Line 4, column 31, Rule ID: IN_JANUARY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on April'? This seems to be a day date.
Suggestion: on April
...ization. I began my internship program in April 20 and finished the course on July 20. ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...uly 20. Although only 3 months, however i learnt so much from you and your compan...
^
Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ty is one of the most important because i can solve the real problems that help m...
^
Line 4, column 508, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...over, I always remember your words when i worked in your legal department, is tha...
^
Line 4, column 628, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... do not let it only dream. That is why, i intend to find a scholarship and study ...
^
Line 4, column 720, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...;s course of law in Canada, after that, i will join the practiced test to become ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6231884058 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86700222241 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8487634469 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25651041611 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920576769499 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701543965963 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180090110234 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391979047972 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.