For the past year you have been a member of a local club. Now you want to discontinue your membership.
Write a letter to the club secretary.
In your letter
state what type of membership you have and how you have paid for this
give details of how you have benefited from the club
explain why you want to leave
Dear Mr. Eastwood,
I regret to inform you about my membership discontinue from your Sports Club. I’ve been visiting the club for 2 years. I enrolled in fall of 2014 on unlimited membership. One year later I obtained a Golden Card for my regular trainings there. I always used Private Bank cards to pay month fees. It was very convenient, because the bank department located near my house.
The unlimited membership allowed me to visit different classes, such as yoga, gym, swimming pool. However, gym is my passion number one, so I’ve been visiting it predominantly. There are very good coaches in the gym, they gave me lots of advance how to be in a good shape and even explained me nutrition program. That allowed me to get rid of digest related problems I had.
The reason why I should leave the club is my forthcoming departure. I’ve received an invitation for a job from Canadian employer, so I will go to Canada in two weeks.
Thank you for your time and services you provided, I advised my friends to join your club and gave them your working number.
Yours faithfully,
Givi Dinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...friends to join your club and gave them your working number. Yours faithfully, ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248908296943 0.220444632235 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.144104803493 0.167888034529 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.056768558952 0.0606518309736 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393013100437 0.0506257000042 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.139737991266 0.118615021944 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0917030567686 0.107062808482 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0349344978166 0.041066498444 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69192801083 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0305676855895 0.0385302599488 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0436681222707 0.0714148451538 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00873362445415 0.0191574576366 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0131004366812 0.00930345855455 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1119.0 1141.60824742 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.134020619 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79792746114 5.53046319177 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331606217617 0.284621296913 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.253886010363 0.211203875043 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.181347150259 0.133321485273 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119170984456 0.0843313296314 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69192801083 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683937823834 0.622163163488 110% => OK
Word variations: 75.5061859379 62.8969750728 120% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 13.7857142857 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2648008951 44.7399317507 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9285714286 90.9928171075 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.4300151701 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.613754768223 47% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 39.174315322 37.5504026743 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.16216216216 1.13073093955 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32503055585 0.331212695627 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0344055372388 0.0927372745006 37% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0399538596947 0.0736520305886 54% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475897762437 0.579516596996 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190017688413 0.180689518051 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989738714835 0.122183219658 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800125771717 0.0765303033291 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.137641015889 0.211926503985 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0525197353165 0.0737400523855 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202289312439 0.203819188451 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765786415807 0.067151250289 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.48453608247 269% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.73195876289 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.56701030928 234% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 8.32989690722 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.