“One good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain,” said Bob Marley. For the quotation, we will know that the music never breaks us. Although it is a strong emotion, sad, pain, and love, it does not mean as someone that unfaithful on us. Currently, music is a part of people’s life. We listen to music for different reasons, for instance, therapy, relaxing and Lonely release. I would like to show you about significant reasons according to my point of view.
First of all, music has essential to therapy, music is necessary to others because it can relieve patience’s disease. For instance, the research from Mr. Meganne K. Masko Ph.D that “a growing number of music therapists work at least part-time with people and hospice and of palliative care. These professionals work with patients to help them reduce their anxiety. Other music can reduce illness such as cancer or renal failure, and can carry through until the patient’s death if the disease does not respond to curative treatment”. Evidently, we will gain information about music that it does not only help to relieve the disease particularly, cancer disease but get rid of patient’s anxiety and stress also. In short, music for therapy has a lot of advantages are reducing pain, relieve anxiety and get rid of stress.
Secondly, music for relaxing, there are many kinds of music that we can choose to listen to express our feeling such as Pop, Rock, R&B, and Folk. It depends on your mood and feeling. For illustrate, when I go back to my hometown, I will listen to rain sounds, it really helps me to relent from hot weather and feel better more and more. Moreover, when I hang out with friends, I want to dance and sing songs so I choose to go to the club that they play rock and folk songs. It's helpful to release from exhausted. To summarize, each type of music can express my feelings that sometimes I cannot express myself but music can!
The last one, music is a friend, when I live alone, I feel nervous and scared. There is only music that understands me. I listen to music for reducing scared. Another one, when I read books, I also listened to music. Now, I write an essay together with listening to music. It can make me concentrate on detail. In addition, I can know immediately about what I will write. Furthermore, music is a best friend because it can use for occupations. For example, you can be a singer, songwriter, and song producer. You will have more and more opportunities in societies. Nevertheless, my roommate, Areeya Peerkhuntod, she listens to music before sleeping every day, she says that if she doesn't do this activity, she can't sleep. To sum up, music can be your best friend because it is always beside you when you are alone and give more opportunities for you.
According to the reasons, we will observe the advantages of music. It's can help us with everything. It's a best friend, spread worldwide that can connect with others, and relieve anxiety. In the modern world, there are many types of music that you can choose to listen to. Let's enjoy the music! Let the music be your best friend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in short, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 4.92783505155 446% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 5.05154639175 416% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 3.03092783505 561% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 77.0 32.9175257732 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 26.3917525773 254% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2604.0 937.175257732 278% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 549.0 206.0 267% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74316939891 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84053189512 3.78020617076 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66396789791 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 127.690721649 222% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515482695811 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 801.0 290.88556701 275% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 27.0 9.13402061856 296% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 12.6804123711 276% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2872662879 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6857142857 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 7.41237113402 256% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263732050758 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749851500062 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642511013084 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156687206868 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327969169594 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 41.2886597938 257% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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