People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter…
Describe the problem
Explain how they are affecting people.
Say what company should do to help.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Manjusha C Nair, a resident of Frazer town. I am writing this letter to raise a complaint against the poor performance of the internet connectivity in my locality provided by your company.
Firstly, the speed of internet connection is extremely slow which ultimately slows down the pace of work and its completion. Also there are issues faced in terms of the connectivity which means the internet connection gets frequently disconnected.
As the speed of the internet connection is extremely slow, it is greatly having an impact on house wives who depend on online shopping for their daily groceries. Students using internet facility for education purposes are affected the most as they are unable to gather information for their assignments from internet due to connectivity fluctuation.
I request you to consider this concern and will be highly appreciated if this issue is solved at the earliest.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Manjusha C Nair
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...wn the pace of work and its completion. Also there are issues faced in terms of the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04320451991 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2700427535 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145548628237 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562412804385 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532914037063 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586250216592 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538701709355 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.