people in your area are having problems with their internet connection write a letter to the company which provides the service in you letter Describe the problem explain how they are affecting people say what the company should do to help begin your lett

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people in your area are having problems with their internet connection. write a letter to the company which provides the service in you letter:
Describe the problem
explain how they are affecting people
say what the company should do to help
begin your letter with
sear sir or madam

Dear sir or madam

I am writing this letter because of the numerous problems your service presents in the last couple of weeks here at Camden street. We are having severe difficulties, and your call center is not giving good responses.

Every single house in the condo is having trouble with the internet service. The connection's speed is awful; the service is intermittent and falls off suddenly. These issues are affecting the families around here. In my case, I could not make a virtual online meeting yesterday afternoon, and if this problem goes on, I would have to travel to the city for my upcoming appointments.

I believe you should immediately send technical staff to solve our problem. It is not enough with the response you gave us through the customer service call center, and Therefore, you must not charge us the days the service has been off.

Yours faithfully.

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2021-11-20 carloscabh 61 view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60191382554 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1485528466 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243412442643 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880464676067 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376979043069 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143195597658 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326085739237 0.0580467560999 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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