The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The university sport centre in future is going to witness dramatic changes. Essentially, there are going to be more sports facilities and plentiful service stores.
The present sport centre is seperated into three parts. The largest which is located in the middle has the access on the southern side and a pool situated centrally, with a changing room and the seating place surrounding it. To the north of the centre there is a gym. The other parts, which lie to the east and the west of the centre, serve outdoor activities.
According to the new layout, the redeveloped sport centre seems to be connected and bigger. The gym is going to enlarge in size and two additional changing rooms are going to be built in both sides of the centre’s southern edge. Besides, a sports shop and a café are going to appear in the entrance zone. The sport centre is going to get a new leisure pool on the east side where the outdoor court used to be. Furthermore, a sport hall is going to replace the last outdoor court.
Overall, the renovated sport centre brings more sport options and better service experiences for customers.
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| 2019-11-23 | Jasmin_tea | 73 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 32.9175257732 3% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81632653061 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54392380255 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525510204082 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 0.824742268041 1212% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5587171984 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174884567624 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772774910741 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506332873624 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113538165374 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281030022199 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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