Please check my writing task 1.
The bar chart compares the proportion of US citizens living alone from 1850 to 2000.
Overall, there was a decrease in all age groups increase throughout of this period. Aloso, the percentage of people living alone in the 55-64 age group was highest.
In 1850, the information about people living alone in 3 types of age groups from 37 to 64 was relatively similar, at around 2.4 percent. This figure remained relatively constant in 5 decades later. Furthermore, there was a new age group from 27 to 36 with just over 2 percent in the same year.
The proportions of US dwellers living alone rose slightly from 3 age groups before and a new age group of youngster, while there was a sharp climb in elderly group. The rest of the period saw a significant increase in all age groups. The proportion of elderly living alone was the highest, at around 17%. By contrast, the rate for youngster was at the lowest in 5 different age groups of about 5%. Approximately 13% of people living alone in 47-54 group, compared to 8% and 7% in 27-36 and 37-46 group respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...significant increase in all age groups. The proportion of elderly living alone was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67676767677 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63239377565 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3495292087 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2307692308 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0111372991669 0.216113520407 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00979688690729 0.0766984524023 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339374117589 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.017408893585 0.12726935374 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03481778717 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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