At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's world of increasing population, many countries having large number of young adult population in comparison of older people. With increasing in number of population, countries also gainining benefits in many areas with the help of young people new ideas and talents. Though we can not ignore the experience hands of older people in same way which helping in countries development.
Now, If we consider about the aspects of advantages and disadvantages of large number of young adults so we will find that, because of young talent countries have developed so far in areas of technologies, politics, cinemas etc. Beacuse of ideas and fresh approach various ways of problem solving achieved by people. Young talent helped in economy growth, share market, risk taking and making survival possible in dead and backward areas.
There are few disadvantages as well if we see the global warming, competition and physical and mental pressures cause because of increase in number of population of young adults. Because of these advantages in today's world we are not able to get the best out of natural resources.
So, advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages and people have ignored the basic aspects of living and more focused on the survival rather than living healthy and fully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: increasing
...ion in comparison of older people. With increasing in number of population, countries also gainining...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of young people new ideas and talents. Though we can not ignore the experience hands ...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n number of population of young adults. Because of these advantages in todays world we ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red the basic aspects of living and more focused on the survival rather than livi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25714285714 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73410060577 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57619047619 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7363435699 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296387612186 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114422588335 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784892594929 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163228452587 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478366670541 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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