Q you have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the city museum shop during holidays. You decide to apply for the job.Introduce your selfExplain what experience and special skills you haveExplain why you are interested in the

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
Dear sir, My self jenny,i am 24 years old and doing master progra...
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Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...am very organized and talkative person. i am writing this to apply for the job yo...
^
Line 2, column 256, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...am very organized and talkative person. i am writing this to apply for the job yo...
^
Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to learn about this kind of job because i visited this museum many times and want...
^
Line 6, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...d to present history about this beauty. so; I want to become part of this great mu...
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Line 6, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...nt to become part of this great museum. Meanwhile I want to earn some money during my bre...
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Line 11, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you Yours sincerely jenny ...
^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g from you Yours sincerely jenny
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85465116279 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74315116474 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68023255814 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0521751325 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215429110049 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808026593741 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11190901331 0.0603063233224 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898926674647 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742770134264 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.