Q: You will move to new city for work. You know some people who live there. Write a letter to one of your friends. In your letterAsk them for help finding accommodation, tell them where you would like to live and tell what type of place you are looking fo

Dear Charles

It has been a long time since we had written to each other. Finally, I gathered courage to put pen to paper. Hope this letter find you in good health.

My company has shortlisted me to work at client site and you would be glad to know that I would d be coming to your city in the first week of June. I am really excited about this and I need your help in browsing suitable accommodation for me.

The official work location is near to Down Town lake, so I would prefer staying nearby. It would help me in saving time and transportation expenses. In which part of city are you staying with your family?

Regarding the property priorities, I am seeking a furnished apartment having all the kitchen setup. Apart from this, room with private bathroom will be my requirement. I develop some breathing problem whenever there is smoke or dust is nearby, so strictly no smoking zone around that area. And, it would be better if WI-FI is already installed, as I am having an option of working from home.

I am sure you will find decent apartment for me and I can not wait to seeing you soon.

Best Regards
Hary

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, really, regarding, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48309178744 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45495249589 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5461211206 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2857142857 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237305708969 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746098567571 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820721419727 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143136312076 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737034497664 0.0580467560999 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.