Question: Your Friend bought the tickets for the theatre for both of you
Write a letter to your friend you cannot go to the theatre. In your letter,
• Apologize
• Explain the situation
• Tell him what he can do with the extra tickets.
Dear Amit,
I hope you are doing well! I am writing a letter to inform you, at the last week we had planned for the watch the drama. However, you had purchased the tickets online and reserved the front seat for the better view of drama performance.
Firstly, I would like to beg the pardon for the inconvenience not spectating the drama because of the certain issue or reason. I hope you will be no more upset with after the letting knows my situation.
Explaining the situation further, my mother has been suffering from a diabetic disease chronically for two days. Hence, I need to check-up for her at a nearby hospital which is very essential and inevitable for me. This is the main reason, I have to be cancelled the plan not to enjoy the dramatic environment.
Nonetheless, I do not want to waste our money, if someone is ready to buy tickets from us. It might be your friend or family member. Thus, wastage of money will not be anymore and this could be worthwhile. I look forward to replying at your earliest convenience.
Thanks in advance.
Your's Sincerely
Jaspreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce. Thanks in advance. Yours Sincerely Jaspreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64766839378 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.636374114 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678756476684 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3245309269 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263836895712 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785052322443 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581149022491 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129015627489 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523063369065 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.