Question:
Discuss some of the problems overreliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution
Answer
In this modern era, cars are considered one of the safe mode of transportation. However, too much dependence on them have been associated with certain problems. This essay will discuss some of these problems and possible solutions, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
There are many problems attributed to excessive usage of cars. Firstly, on an individual level, people who overused cars are liable to sedentary life style. Recent study show that 70% of those individuals developed diseases like diabetes and hypertension, which are closely related to lack of exercise. Secondly, from environmental perspective, it contribute greatly to environmental pollution. For example, those cars uses fuel which emit harmful gases that destroyed the ozone layer, which serve as a protection to human beings. Looking at these problems, too much use of cars has deleterious effects on humans and the environment.
On the other hand, some strategies can be done to minimise the problems. One of the solution is people should be using bicycle at some point of their mobility which will help in keeping them active and preventing them from having those diseases associated with sedentary life style. For example, people from Kano are reported to have the least cases of hypertension because of their frequent use of bicycle. Also, the government should provide alternative means of transportation like metro and railway, in order to reduce the burden of pollution in the environment. For instance, Spain has low record of pollution, because of many railways available in the city. Moreover, government should banned the use of old cars which are responsible for emitting green house gases. We can see that, these problems can be greatly reduced if the above measures are put in place.
To conclude, rigorous use of cars have been contributing to many problem both to the person and his environment. Creating alternate routes, use of bicycle and law enforcement by the government are possible soulutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 26.3917525773 197% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 937.175257732 180% => OK
No of words: 318.0 206.0 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90128042562 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 127.690721649 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581761006289 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 290.88556701 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6485099555 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.49484536082 669% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169413928797 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524976956102 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549295428283 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108743573998 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314060001751 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 41.2886597938 242% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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