Questions: You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter – describe the problem with the equipment
- Explain how this problem is affecting your work.
- Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John, one of your loyal customer. I recently purchased phone model number D77 from your store. And now it is having a problem. Specifically, the touch screen is not responding perfectly.
Daily I am using the phone to receive orders for my job as well as to communicate with my customers. Unfortunately, because of the ongoing phone problem, I could not able to receive orders and communicate well. As a result, it is tremendously reducing my sales since the problem started.
I would like to request a check up on my phone problem as soon as possible. Willing to get fix by a competence technician from your shop.
Also I would like to know if there are other options to fix my phone problem. If possible I would like to request for a temporary phone to use.
Please do let me know.
Thank you,
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...competence technician from your shop. Also I would like to know if there are other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as to, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59090909091 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74500266588 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1133909126 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.3846153846 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8461538462 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19703956707 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764208532455 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054189976124 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894840727599 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479353549407 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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