In these years, those large shopping areas are the main reason for the closure of smaller shops because shoppers are more attracted to roam in big malls for what they are after. To my estimation, this trend sounds to be neither positive nor negative improvement since everything has pros and cons. This essay is based on potent facts and valid instances.
To embark upon, several small brick and mortar stores have been closed due to the popularity of big malls in the era of globalization. This new style of shopping put some small stores' sellers in an unsatisfying situation. In fact, many of them could not keep up their business because it is not profitable and they had to change their jobs and in this duration, they have been jobless for several months. To encapsulate the presented fact let me illustrate an example from an Australian shop keeper. Jony Neran a 54-year-old man had a clothes shop for almost 23 years but due to the recent mall near his shop on the same street, he has lost many customers. If we look at this issue from this angle it is not a beneficial trend due to the lots of people who become bankrupt.
On the other hand, expanding the big shopping malls is a favourable aspect for cities all around the world. First and foremost, these huge malls with their impressive and at the same time appealing buildings bring beauty to the cities. Secondly, Not only people can easily shop in wide areas of malls but also they can go to cafes, restaurants or cinemas in the same mall. In other words, these malls are multi-purpose places which can offer people various services ranging from shopping to watching your favourite movie or go to a food court. To cite an example, it has been a 2years that a large complex has been constructed with all facilities such as theatres, sky lounge and luxurious restaurants near my house Since then I do my shopping there as it is far more convenient to go to different shops as I can find everything in one place.
By way of conclusion, I believe this change has both positive and negative impacts based on the presented facts as well as instances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 658, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 26.3917525773 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 937.175257732 187% => OK
No of words: 376.0 206.0 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65957446809 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 3.78020617076 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54750585913 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 127.690721649 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558510638298 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 290.88556701 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 1.44329896907 624% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9824662892 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0666666667 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 4.34317383033 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377046505049 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112481629132 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554068596652 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201466741005 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079409805088 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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