In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive development or a negative development?
Boom in supermarkets has significantly changed the customer's tendency to choose their shopping places. As a result, number of low scale local businesses have shut down. This phenomena brings both positive and negative aspects and this essay will analyse both aspects with examples to present a conclusion.
Firstly, rapid growth in shopping malls results in economic growth of the society. For example, property prices and value go high if there is a supermarket in vicinity of that area. Moreover, supermarkets opens the door of employment for certain group of people. For example, security guards, cashiers, customer care executives etc. Secondly, from customer perspective, malls are time saving and convenient places to purchase their daily household items under one roof. These stores offer plenty of facilities for the ease of their customers. For instance, car parking service, kids care section so that parents can freely buy, discounts and sales to save their money. Not only this, customers can rely on the brand value and quality of the products they purchase. Customer support services provided by these stores is highly appreciable. By considering aforementioned facts, supermarkets certainly have positive aspects in many ways.
On the flip side, If we look at local vendors' perspective then these shopping centers have affected their business and popularity. Eventually, sale of local businessmen have reduced significantly. However, I think that by offering facilities like home delivery, value pack purchasing, small shops can gain their popularity back among customers and can compete against supermarkets at some extent.
By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that though local vendors have been suffered with the expansion of shopping malls, the positive developments these large places offer can not be ignored. Since there are possible ways for small businessmen to come back in market and beat supermarkets in some extent. So, benefits of shopping malls certainly overweigh their negative impacts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
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Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... scale local businesses have shut down. This phenomena brings both positive and nega...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'bring'.
Suggestion: bring
...sinesses have shut down. This phenomena brings both positive and negative aspects and ...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vendors'' or 'vendor's'?
Suggestion: vendors'; vendor's
... On the flip side, If we look at local vendors perspective then these shopping centers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 937.175257732 184% => OK
No of words: 313.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52396166134 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79901015338 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 127.690721649 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626198083067 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 290.88556701 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0029777285 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28733811575 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788069028677 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556251395001 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183469007239 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424529285122 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 41.2886597938 225% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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