Recently you have attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the result. Write a letter to HR manager of the company. In your letter, you should:
-give details of the job
-tell why you think the interview went well
-explain why you need to know the result.
Dear Sir,
I am writing today to ask about the result of my interview which I had given last Friday in your ABC company.
I applied for the position of a software engineer in your firm through your online job portal where I had received an invite from the Human resource department to come for an interview on last Friday in your office premises. The interview was conducted in three rounds such as technical round, manager round, and HR round.
Fortunately, my interview went well because of my spectacular answers, confidence, and fluent communication skills. The HR and Manager were surprisingly amazing to see my presentation skills on one of the business problems given by them. Besides, I am a subject matter expert of my field which is one of the prominent reasons of my heart-warming interview.
However, my main concern for writing today is to get an update about the interview result as it is almost five business days and still I did not receive any response from the HR about my interview result. Please share the result as early as possible because if I am selected, I have to give an advance leaving notice to my current organization before resigning my current company.
I hope you understand my concern and share the results soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: AN_INVITE[1]
Message: Use only in informal register. In other registers, 'invitation' should be used.
Suggestion: invitation
...line job portal where I had received an invite from the Human resource department to c...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, still, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91818181818 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79707639575 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586363636364 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5384824699 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.2 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198565017281 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07703059363 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396540682088 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111523354019 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217350138913 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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