Recently you have traveled by plane and during the journey you had an issue with one of airline employees Write a letter to the company manager and say Give details of your flight Describe the issue you have encountered What do you expect the

Dear Sir,

I am Rajesh Agarwal, a passenger who traveled by your flight AG-410 from Jammu to Patna on 24th March 2019. The intention behind this letter to bring your attention towards the rude attitude of one of the air hostess on the same flight name Shaiya.

Actually, I was not feeling well on the flight and therefore had requested for medicine to her. First, she asked me to wait for a few minutes as she was in the middle of executing someone's else request which is understood to me. Afterward, she got occupied with another passenger's request which clearly came later my request. And she replied very rudely that I should learn to wait when I reminded her politely for the medicine. What was worse was that she never gave me the medicine on a three-hour flight despite a couple of reminders.

I request you take appropriate action against her. She not only behaved in an unprofessional manner with me but with other passengers too. Therefore, she definitely need a lesson on the right behavior and attitude towards customers. I would really like to hear back from you on the action you have taken in this regard.

Yours faithfully,
Rajesh Agarwal

Votes
Average: 4.7 (2 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tess on the same flight name Shaiya. I was not feeling well on the flight and ...
^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...wever, afterwards she got occupied with a other passengers request which clearly ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, really, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61165048544 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5307608902 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1982071928 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163441574147 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616201724051 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643072420268 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114714822781 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724584828457 0.0580467560999 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.