Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of this information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this.
In your letter, you should tell:
how you know about this city/town
what information was incorrect
what the editor should do about this
Hi Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, Yesterday, you wrote an article in Navbharat times newspaper and I found it quite impressive and knowledgeable content which you had written regarding my village. However, I want to inform you that, you
mentioned in newspaper that my village does not have sports facility due to this reason my village younger generation are not taking actively participate in state level championship.
I would like to share some reputed sports person names which are natively belongs to my village and they had taken training from my village stadium. Now they are successful and top of the career as well as they are ideal for young generation.
It is important to portray the true picture my village in your newspaper. Also, I am requesting you to correct the information and publish the updated information in your next article. So, It will influence the positive attitude towards the sports.
Your faithfully,
Kuldip Kumar
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| 2022-01-31 | surajgupta1993 | 87 | view |
| 2022-01-30 | surajgupta1993 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... However, I want to inform you that, you mentioned in newspaper that my village d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0736196319 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75770795061 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650306748466 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3995614021 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24417103625 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883121225326 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110185465554 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137311743315 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146252197396 0.0580467560999 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.