A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
• explain what you are currently doing
• describe your suitability for this area of work
• say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the job advertised in The English newspaper. I find myself appropriate for this job since I possess all those qualities mentioned in the advertisement. I can show anytime but possibly not on Friday.
I am currently doing part-time job in a bank, and I have been doing this for the last one year. My job responsibility is to inform as well as guide visitors about latest policies the bank. I love and quite passionate to do this kind of job in which public dealing is involved.
Since I have been dealing with public for the last one year, I believe that I can handle public inquiries conveniently, and could also convey them information effectively. Secondly, my current experience of dealing with people of all ages would support me to perform the duty of waitress efficiently. Most importantly, I have been awarded a certificate of appreciation by branch manager of the bank.
I would like you to give me a chance to express my abilities in your restaurant. You can call me for conducting interview at any time which you think appropriate. However, it would not be possible for me to come on Friday due to a family event.
Thanks in advance for considering me. I am looking forward to having your reply in this regard.
Yours faithfully,
Syed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ow anytime but possibly not on Friday. I am currently doing part-time job in a b...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
... is to inform as well as guide visitors about latest policies the bank. I love and quite pas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71052631579 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91284870808 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0425772771 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276779915676 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930026322111 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599551659924 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15163288491 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512383527401 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.