The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library manager, in your letter, include
- A brief introduction of yourself
- Your experience and relevant skills
- Why you want the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in relation to the advertisement placed in the college notice board for a part time assistant to work in the library during summer vacation for a small payment. I have been pursuing Graduate program in Library Science in your school and available for work.
While I was in school, I worked as a volunteer at my community library, assisting the librarian with check-in and check-out of books. Also, I organized story telling sessions for less privileged children in a nearby slum. Being a student of library science, I possess outstanding skills in book-keeping and restoration of old books.
This job is very important for me, not only for financial benefit, but also to gain invaluable experience in managing a library. Moreover, I am interested to take up voluntary work which will benefit the community. In addition to that, doing some part-time job will help boost my confidence level and give me a sense of individuality and independence. I have attached my resume for your kind consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Kiran Attaluri
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| 2018-01-06 | attaluri Kiran | 61 | view |
| 2017-12-24 | attaluri Kiran | 78 | view |
| 2017-12-24 | attaluri Kiran | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...laced in the college notice board for a part time assistant to work in the library during...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... While I was in school, I worked as a volunteer at my community library, assis...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98697550782 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5860973125 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214053521507 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737803472839 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05005937905 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105738247909 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580678639802 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.