The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager.
In your letter include:
– A brief introduction of yourself
– Your experience and relevant skills
– Why you want the job
Dear Sir or Madame,
My name is Jonathan Riley and I am a 3rd year student. I am studying Biology and plan on going to graduate school after I graduate. I am writing to express my interest in the open job position at the school library. I saw the advertisement posted on the job board in the career centre.
While I was in high school, I worked as a volunteer at my local library. I helped the other librarians with checking out books, returning books to the shelves, and answering the telephones. I spent a year as a volunteer there.
I noticed that the position is part time, which would be great because I still need some time to study. I have some relevant experience and I’m a person dedicated to doing a good job. I am available at your convenience and can be reached by phone or by email.
Sincerely,
Jonathan Riley
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...student. I am studying Biology and plan on going to graduate school after I graduate. I ...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pen job position at the school library. I saw the advertisement posted on the job...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I spent a year as a volunteer there. I noticed that the position is part time,...
^
Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...here. I noticed that the position is part time, which would be great because I still n...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ecause I still need some time to study. I have some relevant experience and I’m a...
^
Line 7, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a person dedicated to doing a good job. I am available at your convenience and ca...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 686.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48366013072 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68803116712 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627450980392 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3571904634 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.3636363636 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109863154593 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391042184755 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046062732811 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678162952074 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363897205723 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.