In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.

What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

In this non-stop advancing era, there is a drastic change in the movement of people from one place to another. Most people nowadays prefer to travel in their own personal vehicles rather than using public transport services like local buses, trains, etc. There are multiple causes of this situation and one of the main causes is poor public transit and overcrowded buses or trains. The government must take necessary actions to tackle this menace by indulging more transport on most visiting places to avoid more passengers boarding public vehicles than the desired limit and employ more staff for cleanliness and time management.

To embark with undoubtedly, one of the main causes of increasing traffic is substandard public transit whether it is a train or a bus. Most people avoid using public transport in order to avoid waking up a few hours early than their regular schedule for catching a bus or train on time. Moreover, sometimes public vehicles get late as compared to normal scheduled time and they might miss the transit route by seconds or minutes and have to wait for another planned route for few more minutes resulting in showing up late at work. Therefore, the Government must take this seriously and take necessary steps either to make their transit trustworthy and effective or another solution can be constructing more roads or widening them.

Another main reason why traffic has become a menace on roads is the inconvenience and overcrowding faced by many individuals every day using the public transport system. Most of the local trains and buses are overcrowded with people, making it difficult for travelers to breathe even and female travelers are worst affected because of this issue. This is why more and more people are buying their personal vehicles in order to avoid such kind of hassle. Local authorities must initiate necessary steps to overcome this by adding different compartments in trains for female travelers or providing separate seating arrangements for ladies or kids in all of the buses. Moreover, increasing no. of vehicles on busier or most visiting routes would be an ideal solution to avoid unnecessary overcrowding as well as exhaustion.

In conclusion, considering all the above I believe that every problem comes with a solution and government and few local bodies are entirely responsible for traffic jams on roads and need of an hour is only management of increasing traffic by investing more in public infrastructures like roads, highways, and public transits.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 5.05154639175 495% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 26.3917525773 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 937.175257732 226% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 410.0 206.0 199% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17317073171 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 3.78020617076 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73277418191 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 127.690721649 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49512195122 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 290.88556701 231% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8194496939 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115664563319 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435236008887 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342178508795 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078070390842 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141195479511 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 8.37731958763 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 70.7449484536 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 41.2886597938 245% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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