It is believed by some that either your home or the place you are working in ought to be kept in a neat and flawless way. In my perspective, I totally support this assertion since I believe being organized would greatly benefit people based on valid facts and potent instances which will be all discussed further in this essay.
Having spotless as well as tidy rooms would bring individuals' lives countless virtues. I would highlight the considerable ones. First and foremost, time would be saved if you put everything in its place as next time you can find it with no confusion in a blink of an eye. Secondly and importantly, when you are resting or working in no messy condition it would help you to focus in a better way. In other words, the disciplined environments around you will certainly boost your peace of mind fulfilling your ongoing tasks even when it is a simple task such as lying in a coach and watching tv. Let me encapsulate the latter idea by illustrating a fact from a survey which is conducted by Canadian scientists two years ago. In this study, the scientists have reached the fact that organized surroundings will flourish your creativity, boost your focus level and bring you a better prospect on different challenges.
Having all that said when you have an organized workplace you can function better at your work. To cite an example let me put a light on international Australian organization. About three years ago the CEO of this company realized that there is 23 percent of retrogression in the financial department in this company. Consequently, they have asked an external investigation team to evaluate employees' function however they have not reached any acceptable findings. Once this team closely observe the financial department and they have seen a super unorganized place to work. therefore, from that time they have asked employees to keep their tables, Files and closets tidy. After one month, the result was astounding in fact there was a 43percent of improvement by just keeping their workplace neat.
By way of conclusion, I think it is vital to have clean as well as organized places to live or work in as it can offer us a host of beneficial consequences based on presented truisms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, i think, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 937.175257732 198% => OK
No of words: 382.0 206.0 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85602094241 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 3.78020617076 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82715362523 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 127.690721649 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560209424084 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 290.88556701 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.736470968 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.117647059 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187772570364 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541422327539 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570277680095 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106211770218 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360284676924 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 41.2886597938 233% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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