Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to imply my gratefulness for the wonderful services we have received from your hotel. add to this I want to attract your attention to the quality of the food your hotel serves.
To introduce myself, I amHiva farahani, the vice manager of General Motors company. Last Wednesday, I had a meeting in the sky lounge of your hotel with my ten other guests. Actually, after the meeting, I have earned several positive feedback from my guests for your hotel. To name some of them, most invitees have written that the staffs working in your hotel are all welcoming, friendly and respectful and you feel they are always there to give you a helping hand for any issues you may confront. Further, the participants of my meeting have written in their Facebook accounts that they are really in love with the nice and warm view of the sky lounge overlooking the mountains and you can breathe the fresh air all over the lounge.
It is really sad to say, nonetheless, I have not received any satisfactory viewpoints about the Italian food which was served at your hotel the last Wednesday. My guests have all confirmed that the quality of the food was poor and the salad dishes were all smelly and the foods were served very cold. In fact, most of the foods were remain untouched by my guest since they have found it not very delicious in taste and not very appetizing in design.
I would appreciate it if you bring this issue to your attention and it does not seem like an unsolvable problem. I recommend you check the freshness of the Italian cook's food ingredients every day and be certain they are of good quality. Moreover please ask the waiters to serve the meal while they are warm.
Thanks for your attention to this matter.
Respectfully yours,
Hiva Farahani,
General Motors Vice Manager
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Add
...vices we have received from your hotel. add to this I want to attract your attentio...
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Line 6, column 334, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...y cold. In fact, most of the foods were remain untouched by my guest since they have f...
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Line 8, column 239, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...nd be certain they are of good quality. Moreover please ask the waiters to serve the mea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, may, moreover, nonetheless, really, so, well, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 937.175257732 165% => OK
No of words: 331.0 206.0 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67069486405 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41543005531 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 290.88556701 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8805101591 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360919850246 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107048769917 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531222006652 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15263039361 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802294987073 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.